Naitemo

(Played 8 months ago, only able to comment just now)

woooah, underrated gem to tug at your heartstrings (tearducts leaking risk included, mine def did) and in such a short time of making Denshi and Nogia (is it read No-ji-a or was that just a silly misread), under Nogia’s father kind parenting too. the story delivered the meanings smoothly made the happy end all satisfying with that answer tied to the title turned out for the good true conclusion, and the bad end as much bleak.. kinda disappointing that

spoilers

both Kumori and Ari werent that genuine/loyal with Nogia, tho at least Fuun’na could possibly be her girl friend,

at least the main leads were sweet and loveable to make up for it.

there were some typos; a word ‘transverse’ which i wasnt sure if it meant as traverse or fine like that, and the others were

• She always offered to do things for the two of them like carrying the bike over rough paths, and fighting off ‘rouge’ robots.
• Nogia was no match for her. She lifted the faceplate from Nogia’s head, ‘reveling’ the many circuits, gears and wires beneath.
• It didn’t matter if ‘Kaori’? wanted a break from holding him, in the end it was Nogia who would decide what happened to Denshi.
• Someone who ‘lived used’? his own hands to construct her, to teach and nurture her.

this one def nailed down that nostalgic nvl look of older VNs too like the other said, and i loved it.